She Found Me
I was scared silly in that place.
I didn’t know where I was.
I’m glad she found me.
I don’t think the others like me.
I hope she can keep me.
I’m glad she found me.
I love her because she cares.
I love her because she feeds me.
I’m glad she found me.
I am safe in her lap
So I bark with excitement.
I’m glad she found me
I am her partner for life.
And she is mine.
I’m glad we found each other.
Tuesday, October 6, 2009
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Jessica,
ReplyDeleteI could feel the excitement(and see Winn Dixie's tail wagging madly with joy)throughout your poem.You did an awesome job.
This poem is very cute. The description of the relationship between Opal and Winn Dixie is perfect in the poem. I would have never thought about writing from the perspective of Winn Dixie.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great poem.I chose Winn-Dixie also, but there is a big difference between your poem and mine. I think you captured the relationship between a dog and owner perfectly.
ReplyDeleteJessica,
ReplyDeleteI loved how you captured how Winn-Dixie felt in the book. Through your poem you could sense how important his relationship with Opal really was, which to me was one of the most important parts of the book.