Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Because of Winn Dixie: I Poem

Wisp of Memory
I am the mere wisp of memory
I amuse the world with mirth
I possess tresses the color of flame
I have on my skin caramel kisses from the sun
I hold an extraordinary ability to make things grow
I am the mere wisp of memory

I travel with the wind as swift as a gazelle
I am not the virtue of domesticity
I wrestle with the sustenance of life
I become engulfed in the yarns of man
I laugh at the mischief and mirth of a storyline
I am the mere wisp of memory

I perceive the sound of stars whispering their names
I abhor living like a ladybug under a magnifying glass
I vanished into the embrace of alcoholism
I loved my child
I am India Opal’s mother
I am the mere wisp of memory

6 comments:

  1. I love this Angie. I wrote about Winn Dixie because i can realte with Opal. I have recently been involved in a similar dog situation so this story was very appropriate for me.

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  2. The poem is simply amazing and very deep. The word choice of your poem reflects the complicated life of Opal's mother. I found her complex. I wished Opal would have seen her in the book to see if my prediction was true.

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  3. I think this is a great post. I love that you chose such a challanging character. I would never have thought to choose her. I could tell exactlly who you were soon into the poem but I kept reading to make sure because it was different. It makes her more of an influence in the book

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  4. Angie - I love how you took those ten lines and made them a poem. That was such an unique idea; way to go!!!

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  5. AWESOME JOB! Absolutely beautiful. ~~~brooke~~~

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  6. I really liked you poem and the way you used your words.

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